The A&P Show

Last week we were set a task to do activities based on the A&P show.

I found it quite hard to get all of this work done in three days because you had to get it done to a high standard. 

there were 8 tasks to finish I only got 4 done but im still pretty happy with myself. 

so here is my finished work.

this is the first thing i did which is the history of the A&P show.

this is the second thing i did which is advertising for next year.

this is the 3rd thing i did which was my photo book.

I also made a ride that was called the mountain climber but it went missing. 
I was que proud of it and liked how good the quality was.

Writing Practice

Whats up bloggers yesterday we were given the task to write a story based on a video we watched called the ocean maker. The video had such a great story line. When we watched the video we only watched it up to about 1 minute 50 seconds and then we got to right about what happens  Once we had watched the video as a class we brainstormed about the plane and the character and stuff like that. Then we had to make a plan which we got ten minutes to do. This is my plan.

Then we had to write the story here is my story.

I also wanted you guys to see the video and what I had to base my story off Please leave a comment Telling what i could improve on in my narrative to make it better.