My Newspaper Report

For the past two weeks we have been learning how to make a newspaper.
Then This week we got the task of writing our own newspaper.
We had to do a couple of things we had to:

• Have a picture
• Have a caption for the picture
• Two pages
• A headline
• A main story
• Capital letters and full stops
• A good layout

I haven't finished editing my story yet but I am writing this blog post to ask for feedback on:

• Does it look like a blog post?
• are there any parts that don't make sense?
• Did I use the right punctuation?
• Is it a long enough story or it is to short?
• Does the front page have a good layout?
• Does it need more information?

Please leave me a comment saying what you think.