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Friday, 11 May 2018

Non Chronological Writing

For the first two weeks of term two we have been learning about Non Chronological reports.

We learnt what a non chronological report is. the first thing we learnt was a non chronological report is non fiction, then we had a task of reading a non chronological report and had to look at talk about it and what we thought was interesting about it.

What i found hard about writing a non chronological report is writing in third person because i am used to writing stories in first person.

How I improved my writing it i wrote the story and then after that the teacher commented on it what we needed to improve then we had to rewrite the story.

Here is my story:

AsusbiPom
On september 21st Adidas made a new shoe called Asusbi™ Pom (awesome shoe u should buy it personal own money). This shoe is pretty amazing it is able to do many thing such as it is able to make people bounce with the springs inside it, hold the buyers money in safe little pockets, it has really good soles that are really squishy and help with  posture.

Price

They are only $3000NZD which is only the second most expensive shoe in the world. They priced them to this much because of what the sole is made out of to give lots of comfort to the people that wear them.

The Test

Adidas decided to test them by getting 15 people all different ages to try them for 14 days to see how each person liked them. They started at the age four and then gave one to each person going up in fours so they gave one to a 4 year old, 8  year old, 12 year old, 16 year old so on and so forth.

The Instructions

They told all the people that were trying them out that they should just do everything normally as they would on a normal day. They also told the people to keep a diary entry and record how they felt at the end of each day.

Reviews

Most people said that they were definitely the comfiest shoes they have ever worn but no one said that they would buy them because  of how expensive they were. Some people also said that they did feel like it would make it easier to do a work out like they could just watch T.V. and bounce on the spot or something like that. Some of the younger children said that they liked bouncing around and that the shoes were just really fun. Some people also said that with the cushioning there feet didn’t get as sore during the day as they normally would if they had there normal shoes on. One person said that it helped them sleep better at night because it helped with there posture during the day so there back felt better.

conclusion

In the end no one ended up buying them except for trump because no one else could afford them.





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