Hi, I really enjoyed your poem because you chose a good use of imagery. You chose your background images well, but maybe next time put a voice over on so students who aren’t as matured in literacy can understand. Would you think about having a sequel and turning one of your poems into a full story? My favourite poems are mostly from shakespeare. Thank you -Naomi
Hi I like your poem about yourself. I like how you have laid it out, I also like the words you have put in your poem. It made it interesting to read. I liked your first poem and how you said what you would see and feel as you walk through your garden. Consider the color of your text because I can not really read it because of the background apart from that you have done a good job.
Kia Ora Grace.I like the set out with your poems I also like the way that you just went with them. They all rhyme, as you put in the time. I wish that you could have done more about you. It still was outstanding, as if you were painting you x2
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ReplyDeleteHi, I really enjoyed your poem because you chose a good use of imagery. You chose your background images well, but maybe next time put a voice over on so students who aren’t as matured in literacy can understand. Would you think about having a sequel and turning one of your poems into a full story? My favourite poems are mostly from shakespeare. Thank you -Naomi
ReplyDeleteSorry, wrong person, was being stupid. Please ignore :)
DeleteHi I like your poem about yourself. I like how you have laid it out, I also like the words you have put in your poem. It made it interesting to read. I liked your first poem and how you said what you would see and feel as you walk through your garden. Consider the color of your text because I can not really read it because of the background apart from that you have done a good job.
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DeleteKia Ora Grace.I like the set out with your poems I also like the way that you just went with them. They all rhyme, as you put in the time. I wish that you could have done more about you. It still was outstanding, as if you were painting you x2
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