On thursday i got to school i was so confused why none of the light were on then my teacher said there was a power cut. Then my best friend Ariana (Arianas Blog) came and i ran out and I yelled POWER CUT! We were all so excited until we went to the office and they said that school was closed. So me and ariana started freaking out and yelling our mums are at work but then Ariana's mum came and picked her up and my aunty came and picked me up. and then for the rest of the day at home i did some art and some sleeping.
Hi! Grace I am Antonette from St Bernadette's Primary School. I liked how you put in your best friend's blog so other people could see it. Next time you could check your grammar and punctuation on your story and you could put in capital letters for your names. I liked how you said what you did when you were back at your house. I hope there will not be any more power cuts.
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Hi! Grace I am Antonette from St Bernadette's Primary School. I liked how you put in your best friend's blog so other people could see it. Next time you could check your grammar and punctuation on your story and you could put in capital letters for your names. I liked how you said what you did when you were back at your house. I hope there will not be any more power cuts.
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